Graders Name: Jessica Maras hr 5.Score: Layout: 2/3 Content: 7/7 Total: 9/10Comments: The layout wasn't the 3 slide layout that Mrs.Lang wanted. Otherwise, it looks good!
Angelicascore:20/20
Graders Name: Shelby Gulbronson Score:Layout:2 Content: 7 Total:9/10
8/10 your story was confusing - too many different characters. End with a message your audience can use - either how to protect self or what to do if you are a victim. Text was too small on many of your scenes. JLang
Graders Name: Jessica Maras hr 5.
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The layout wasn't the 3 slide layout that Mrs.Lang wanted. Otherwise, it looks good!
Angelica
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Graders Name: Shelby Gulbronson
ReplyDeleteScore:Layout:2 Content: 7 Total:9/10
8/10 your story was confusing - too many different characters. End with a message your audience can use - either how to protect self or what to do if you are a victim. Text was too small on many of your scenes. JLang
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